Wednesday, 14 May 2014

autumn

Autumn
The gloomy  charcoal ground damp and wet.
The naked trees swooshing in the breeze
Crispy leafs scatterd on the  ground .
The leafs look like a bright orange
Tiger eye
The grey puffy clouds floating  by
Khaki leaves soring through the  sky
Look at the ruby red leafs  shimmering
In the trees.

By Lola

3 comments:

  1. Lola what a fantastic poem! A great description of Autumn.

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  2. i like the bite by lola
    from poppy

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  3. I love your poem Lola it had lots of inflammation.

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